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-- Dragonfly --

A photo I took in our garden yesterday~
I adore our pond for all the beautiful dragonflies.

Taken with my dad's Canon digital camera.
I thought it would be quite nice to show here. :3
Out of all, this the photo I like the most.

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For what it's worth, it's a pleasing photo to look at! The exposure seems to be pretty good, maybe just a little overexposed, but nothing to worry too much about. One thing I notice is the composition could use some work, and this is something that is very common for anyone who doesn't do photography much or is just starting out (if I'm not correct then I'm really sorry XD), and that's making the focus directly in the center of the piece. Right now, my eyes are wondering where the rest of the flower stem is, so I probably would have pitched down a little bit so the dragon fly would be at the top, kind of left region of the picture. By doing this, the piece would have more motion and direction. Sorry for the low originality score, I don't really like rating a piece on originality because to be frank, I don't think every single work of art has to be the most brilliant and original thing in the world. The title states that this is a photo about a dragonfly and the picture doesn't disappoint the title lol. Hope this helps, take care!
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:iconreverbarance:
Ich möcht auch sonen schönen Garten haben ;_; XD
Die Viecher sehen voll genial aus, auch wenn ich sie nie anfassen würde o.o
Das Foto ist echt gut gelungen ^--^
:iconshadowgirlfan:
ihr habt einen gartenteich? *dich beneid*

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PLEASE NO SLANG AND SHORTINGS! I CAN'T SPEAK GOOD ENGLISH!!! I use an online translator and it can't translate slang or shortings.

I kenn you wedder. I have you beschnuppert. And I komm back to you and pett you gegen dat Schienbein, dat you humpelt
:iconallhailshadow:
Aw it's a beautiful shot :3 Very clear and focused. God I wish we had a pond. We got a river at least << Not many pretty bugs around though

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Check out my Sonic fanfiction on my other account! ~ForLoveOrBlood It's a supernatural/romance mix. If you're a Sonic fan, and adore reading stories of love and vampires/werewolves/etc. then please read this and tell me what you think :rose:
:iconmariahacorn:
well yeah.. I read that especially dragonflies are usually found at ponds. Only veeery rarely they are found at rivers and similar things. ^^;
But well thank you :3

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Sonic addicted since I was about 3

Love you more than anything, Björn <3 And nothing will ever change this! :heart::cuddle:

=MariahAcorn :heart: =Shadowhog 4 ever
:iconmariahacorn:
lol danke schön ovo mir is eine kleine libelle kurz auf der Hand gelandet XD ich hab noch fotos von einer mit blauen flügeln 8DDD

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Sonic addicted since I was about 3

Love you more than anything, Björn <3 And nothing will ever change this! :heart::cuddle:

=MariahAcorn :heart: =Shadowhog 4 ever
:iconmariahacorn:
lol joah xD wir hatten schon vorher einen und naja... irgendwie müssen die fische von dort ja hin XDDD

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Sonic addicted since I was about 3

Love you more than anything, Björn <3 And nothing will ever change this! :heart::cuddle:

=MariahAcorn :heart: =Shadowhog 4 ever
:iconsweetchibi:
Thats a awesome photo you did there o.0. Your lucky :heart:

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へ へ
の の
 も
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:iconallhailshadow:
Yeah we see a small few of them around
you're welcome :3

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Check out my Sonic fanfiction on my other account! ~ForLoveOrBlood It's a supernatural/romance mix. If you're a Sonic fan, and adore reading stories of love and vampires/werewolves/etc. then please read this and tell me what you think :rose:
:iconshadowgirlfan:
auch nen teich haben will TTT TTT

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PLEASE NO SLANG AND SHORTINGS! I CAN'T SPEAK GOOD ENGLISH!!! I use an online translator and it can't translate slang or shortings.

I kenn you wedder. I have you beschnuppert. And I komm back to you and pett you gegen dat Schienbein, dat you humpelt
:iconrumpnissen:
those only live one day, a bit depressing isn't it......

AWESOMENESS!! 8D

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